A very short poem. I would like some opinions on the meaning??

Question:

A very short poem. I would like some opinions on the meaning??

The Angels said it is Gods creation.
The Gods said it was a strange coincidence.
The angels said it is Gods creation.
The gods said it was a coincidence.
- Anthony Rother

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I think this poem is about origin, creation and genesis. I think you're trying to say the gods are empowered children that can't understand; as humans, the meaning of creation.

Check out my blog - I've written poems like yours:

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"Jesus chivalrously takes the burden of my sins, you've saved me star but do you know where you're going? Or, was your adventurous mind just o'er flowing. Saviour with the shimmering glow and the touch that makes the senses slow. Your healing hands glided over my skin but the illness I bore didn't come from within, I was angry, with myself or possibly with somebody else and my mind went sour and the dominos lead on as my healthy condition was crushed and I searched for a son, a son who preached divine gospel; a son with a medical past and a private clinic for an old man to pass. He said I sprung back from my horrid affliction but I died in the white washed halls of a private clinic with only false belief in Jesus' papa's jurisdiction."

Another I wrote:

"Creation in the hands of a child,

idly idolising countries mild.

Taking in a tricky breath, and postulating -

the colours of Z Y and X.

The zenith god, with the childish form.

The off-day god, his mammy and pappy,

feeling seperate and torn.

God with the power, god with ambition,

but talking about you won't put you in my vision.

God with the views, god with the schtick.

If you side with one section then you really are a dick."

Just food for thought.

Ciao -

facelessdefacer (Rob)