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Another poem tell me what you think please!?

Tell me!
Tell me what your thinking?
What you see through your eyes?
Tell me what makes your heart beat faster?
& What gives your tummy butterflies?
What does your soul crave?
Or weep with a Disguise?
What do you think your future holds?
Am I there in your dreams of horses dancing in the sky?
Do you really want me in your arms until the day we die?
Do you ever think one day you might want to walk out that door?
Please answer all these questions cause im sorry but I have a million more!


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I like the horses dancing in the sky imagery. Aside from that, it's full of cliches and lacks depth. Sorry.