I wrote this last night, sometimes life can get stressful?

Question:

I wrote this last night, sometimes life can get stressful?

LONELY RED BAG
18.4.07

Lonely red bag in the hallway
Full of stuff I just might need on my journey
Toothbrush and nightie most important
And the number of my attorney

Its been coming for years
But I didn??t know when
It was just a matter of time
That signature with my favourite fountain pen

Kids all grown and left home
It seemed the next stage was to go
From a black hole in my life
To another world and to leave the show

I pick up my red bag with my cold hands
And I close that wooden door and I shake
Im on my own, no one at my side
My heart does no longer ache

And as I reach the end of our road
I take one more look over my shoulder
The deed is done thank god I prey
The sun is boiling hot but I swear its getting colder

Must be my heart
Its leant to cope with no feeling
As time raced on without me
The minutes and seconds it was stealing

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

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