Like my poem?

Question:

Like my poem?

this poem is about when my friend got everything she wanted, but she still felt like she wanted more. I based it on what she said. I just wrote it, and i know that it needs some work. Tell me about what you liked, didn't, and just your thoughts on the poem
Cheated

cheated from what was supposed to be mine, why cant it be mine, not just a dream , a reality? everyone elses happiness is based around mine, but i'm not happy, dissapointed with the greatest of things, is it just a puzzle of my life, and im the peice left out?

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

NICE!