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Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > Can you please review this rap/poem?Question: Can you please review this rap/poem?I am preaching some of my religious nonsense to some underdeveloped kids, and here is a rap I am going to use to introduce myself to the little ones. Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
umm... you dont use profanity when rapping to kids. but if you have a good beat, then you should be okay, even if they dont understand the military mind or criminal grind part. and change 'my pockets are gettin fatta' to something the opposite of money, like education. |