Poem critics?

Question:

Poem critics?

(Lady Luck)-

Vacillation raised a question to wonder
Orthodox self-esteem
Deity go getter
Magnetic unseen paralysis
Empower the muse
Heartsinking palpitations
Of unseen recompension
Will perturb mortality
Milksopped at the end
By the ever lasting
Common sensed judgement
For teared synagogues
Never unfettered of peculiar lucubration

the poem is longer but thats it for now

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It's different than the poems I ususally read but very well written. I'd like to read the rest of it, if you don't mind. Keep writing and I look forward to more.