I??m a beginner at poetry, but what do you think of this poem?

Question:

I??m a beginner at poetry, but what do you think of this poem?

The world will not wait
It will not listen it will not change
For dreams to come to pass
There is little time left to rearrange

My life can be great
But it can also turn sour
If I do not resolve
Within the next precious hours

There is still some hope
A love??s light is strong
Though I only can pray
It will stay that strong for long

Thre pressure of life
Kills the content moments
What to do, what to be
Threatening enjoyments

For one thing I cling on
And for that one thing only
My heart, mind, and my soul all know
I desire that one thing soley

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It's a little hard to see the focus of that poem and it doesn't make much sense.