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Another Poem to Rate if you will?

Ventus (Wind)

Sitting in utter silence,
She came to me so swiftly.
Bounding over ocean and prairie,
Swerving through oaks in dense forests,

She held in her clasp sounds and smells
Of long-forgotten times and places.
Bearing the fragrance of early morning dew,

Hear her whisper a mystifying melody,
As blades of grass piroutte to her tune.
She takes me in her weightless grip,
Far from harm, worry, reality,
Home.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I like the poem - you use all the senses in poetically describing the wind. Good job.