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Can you rate my Poem? PLEASE!?

Faith

Trusting, hoping, Seeing with inner Eyes,
Beyond the mind, the stars, all reasoning,
A vast Love even a Thomas could not deny.
Deep passionate, hoping, Sensation,
Though non-tangible It has become.

With these Eyes, unveil the Wonder,
For which Saints abandoned their lives.
Overflowing, overwhelming Hope to Fallen,
With extreme abandonment they fly.
Of which the Abstract cannot hide


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I thought is was very well written. You created a visual picture of something that you cannot see with your eyes. As a poet myself, I say you are truely talented. I give you 2 thumbs up.