What is your opinion about my poem?

Question:

What is your opinion about my poem?

Thirsty for a fat glass of attention

Why does she act so
Let her destroy herself
Change because she needs to slip perfectly into the sea of sameness
But she forgets the most important thing
To be herself
Not even the others try as hard
But she lets go of reality
And suddenly she's falling too fast
As she grasps back onto the rough, cold reality
Her ignorance appears too fast and again she's falling
But now she wears a mask of denial to hide her truth
Reality is screaming at her but she is walking away from it

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

This sounds like it would make a good song!! That is really good! That just inspired me to finish the poem that I was working on a week ago!!

Bravo!!