Question:
What do you think about this poem?
You think i am okay just because i smile,
you think i'm in denial when i frown,
you just turn around when you see me mad,
just laugh at me when i am sad,
i just want some one to care,
some one that knows i'm there,
i wanted some one to care,
but everyone used me like the air they breathe,
dont care if i fall,dont care if its unfair,
just push me around,
soon it will make me fall down to the ground,
with nothing left but one simple frown,
but soon you will see me laughing once again,
if life would just turn around,
if the frown could turn up-side-down,
if i didnt fall to the ground,
if everything could just turn around,
mabey i could be happy once again,
live like i did once before,
but thats all a fairytale,
a fairytale for the weak,a nightmare stipped bare,
its a dream i wish to come true,
and a dream is one of the most powerful things in the world............................ i am only 11
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I am real harsh on poetry on this site, but there is something about couplets I just love. Also the poem is very innocent, an attribute normaly not found in poems. It may not be Blake, but I like it how it is.