Question:
My new poem...Tell me what you think?
Here lies a beautiful soul
By: Adam Snow
The daylight falls into the blackness night. I saw your face once as you fade into the cold murky night. The Shadows gathered to take you away. Your sorrow filled eyes has scorched my naked soul with grief. Your life has fade away, mine is here to stay. The Shadows has taken you home, but I am caught in this dark forsaken world. The mourners grief for you lost and so do I. Your tombstone reads, ??Here lies a beautiful soul.??
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like it...it's not really my style but I liked it all the same. It made me think. :)