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Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > Is this good? I wrote it for fanfiction, just wanna know what you think...??Question: Is this good? I wrote it for fanfiction, just wanna know what you think...??I HATE THEM, I screamed to myself, I hate them for killing James; I hate him for going and leaving me with no real reason to do anything?? They had killed him, so now I would kill, I would kill, I would kill, I was straining to think of a safe way for me to hurt them, in particular to hurt Edward. Then suddenly it hit me, that human girl, the one who caused all the problems. But I couldn??t go there, not now. I will get Laurent to go for me, check it out, see where they are, if their clan has grown, and, to eliminate any signs of danger for me. He will come back and tell me it is safe and I will go and KILL that weak frail human girl. They can do NOTHING to stop me. But, I only have to convince Laurent to do that for me?? Why did he have to make that deal with that clan?? ugh! I hate them! ??Laurent,?? I yelled. ??I need you to do something for me.?? There was no need for me to yell, but I did, for effect. ??What, Victoria??? He demanded, I hate when he is impatient. Additional Details3 months ago 3 months ago Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
to short and what is it fan fiction of... sorry dont know |