What do you think of my poem?

Question:

What do you think of my poem?

Plaese be honest i really want to know.

Love

Love is never ending
it's like the ocaen, so wide and so deep
With no way to swim through it
Love cannot harm you, i don't see why it would want to
and love is for everyone,
no one is left out
and without it where would we be
for without it we would surely die.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

The only thing I don't like about it, is that it's that its not very poetic. You just kind of say facts "Love is for everyone" "no one is left out". There's no rhyme or flow or poetic-ness to it.

Thats my opinion. Its good though, I just think it could be more.