Question:
Poem I wrote...Feedback Please?
Poem: Sex Isn't An Option
by: Poetically Incorrect a.k.a C!LLa
Sex is something that is used to cover up the insecurities
For not loving myself enough
He sees an easy target, so he targets me
Knowing that it means so much to me
for someone like him to be intrested
He acts on it
I fall for it
giving him all his sexual desires and more
being so naive, not knowing sex is all he's using me for
I give him what he wants and not get any love in return
After he's done, he gets up and run
From the girl he used to pleasure his sex crazed mind
All I was to him was a piece of a**,
Forgetting all about being a good girl with class
I tarnish my image, just to be another teenage girl willing to be fast
He saw me to be nothing more, but his sex toy
I thought giving him sexual pleasures would bring me joy
but in the end I ended up feeling the same way
Still so f****** insucure about myself
Sex didn't make me more of the young
Additional Details3 months ago
lady I wanted to be
Looking at other women using sex as a weapon, I thought I could do it too
Low cut top, tight fitted jeans, with lip gloss to tease
Wanted to be like that video chick, that every dude wanted to hit
Hoped and Wished to be desired by many guys
Thinking I could bulid up my pride by taking them for a ride
But in the end it's all the same
Still living without loving myself is the biggest pain
No matter how many dudes get to feel inside of me
It's still blantly plain to see
No amount of sex can cure me of the biggest insecurity:
Myself
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
A very sad poem that depicts the many problems faced by girls today.
As I read it, I was able to feel the tragedy faced by the girl in it.
Nice job. I hope that you'll feel better and be much more confident of yourself in the future.