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Rate my poem plz 1-10...?

"I Tought My Cat To Clean My Room"
I taught my cat to clean my room,
to use a bucket, brush and broom,
to dust my books and picture frames,
and pick up all my toys and games.

He puts my pants and shirts away,
and makes my bed, and I should say
it seems to me it's only fair
he puts away my underwear.

In fact, I think he's got it made.
I'm not too happy with our trade.
He may pick up my shoes and socks,
but I clean out his litterbox

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3 months ago
I'm trying to make some poems that younger children would like to read...Thx!!


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

In view of the intended audience, I give it a 9.