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Rate this plz (1 poem)?

Tired
You weary of this life
And these obligations
Expectations
Of others you try to meet
Failure is infeasible
Impossible
To keep these promises
With the odds stacked against you
Continue
Going through the movements
Of a life that was never really you
Clue
End this fa㧡de
Be yourself


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

OMG I really like this one! I could use this one on a daily basis to describe myself, and I'm 40! You hit the nail right on the head. The last three lines truly says it all. Bravo!