Question:
What do you of this Poem for a school project?
Walking through the world
Of my mommies tummy
Hearing words in a different togue
Carrying on awkward traditions for the world at judge
Running from a world of troubles
Cause by grief that i couldn't comprehend
Begging for its misery,and change
Nothing unfortunately, went as planned
Enjoying adventures at both ends
Sandy white beach became my land
Longing to hibernate back with my fellow dolphins
Back before August stroke of mid night
From Period Bay i went
Schools became a shallow grave
With its own laws,and
Accepts you inscribe on a dead tree
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It is not finished. change the second line. need a comma "Back before August, stroke of midnight".