Do you like my poem?

Question:

Do you like my poem?

My mates got piles, you'd look glum if you had his bum. My mates got piles.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

you really need to get out more are better still go out to a library and read some real poetry, you have to much time on your hands, you must be a student GOD HELP US Just think you are the next generation and all you can come up with is trash like that ,