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Do you like the poem i wrote?

THE LIONESS ROARS
IT'S ALL HALLOWS EVE
AND IN ALL FORMS
THE DEVIL COMES TO FEED

OUR INIQUITIES OUR CONTRACT
YES, MISTAKES OUR DEED
AND WHO ARE WE TO BLAME
WHEN OUR OWN BASKETS WE WEAVE

THE WALLS SO HOLLOW
THE LIGHTS SO DARK
EXISTENTIAL BELT BLASTS
AND I HIT THE FLOOR

INSIDE I SCREAM
FOR I'VE BEEN HERE BEFORE

AS I CURL UP
MY MIND IT TRICKS
I CRY OUT AT
WHITE NOISE, POPS AND CLICKS

I SEE THE MONSTER
MY CHILD FIGHTS AND CLAWS
I PULL OUT MY GUN
I YELL TO DUEL

MY MIND LOSES PURPOSE
COMING UNDONE

THE LIONESS ROARS
IT'S ALL HALLOWS EVE
AND IN ALL FORMS
THE DEVIL CAME TO FEE


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

From one writer to another I think its very well written. However without access to my writing tools, I don't quite get this word "EXISTENTIAL".

I do wonder what inspiration created this literary work?