Question:
Do you like my poem "if you"?
if you were a mountain
i??d pull myself up to your highest peak
breathe in the wind that has carved out your shape
with vision outstretched from your loftiest heights
embracing your blue sky in my greatest escape
if you were a star
i would traverse the distance to your celestial sea
to feel your warmth penetrating the deep cold of space
bathe in your glow, alive, warm and free
as your graceful orbit secures us in place
if you were the earth
i would plant in you a garden
and germinate the sweetest of flowers and vines
i'd water , and feed you with the utmost of care
an eternal beauty to weather the persistance of time
⩁B07'
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I REALLY LOVE IT BECAUSE OF THE NATURE IMAGERY USED AND THE TOTAL IDENTIFICATION WITH THE NATURE EVEN THE OPINION TO SEEK SOLACE IN NATURE. IT COULD BE READ AS A POEM OF LOVE IN WHICH THE AUTHOR HAS BEEN ENGULFED