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Well i wrote this poem and i would like to know how good it is! cause i usually don't write poems!?

Tonight
tonight... I might cry
Tonigh...I might scream
Tonight.. I might run away
but tonight i will start a new chapter in my life

Tonight...i mightt live
Tonight....i might die
Tonight...I mihgt be saved
but tonight I will be happy again

Tonight...I will let go
Toinight..I will sing
Tonight...I will be me again
but toniht i know you are still no longer mine

Tonight.. yoru not with me
Tonight..your with her
Tonight..your not on my mind and never will be again
but tonight i am walkign away from you, her, and everything that has hurt me and leaving it behind


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

pretty good, although in the third stanza, i recommend changing the first and last line so that they stay with the third stanza's topic. maybe you can move them into the last stanza, or put them in a new one entirely.