Does this poem meet the requirments?

Question:

Does this poem meet the requirments?

Love is something undescribable
Love can sometimes be undesirable
Sometimes it can hurt, but most of the time it ends up being well worth the hurt.

Requirments: It has to have more than three lines more then 17 syllabols no seasons words such as winter spring fall or summer and has to ryhme

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

As awriter of poetry,this is ok, but can you try to incorprate some feeling within it,(such as with the undesirable and the indescribable aspect?),and more rhyme,along the last line; Sometimes it can hurt,but most of the time it ends up being well worth the hurt...