Rate this poem please?

Question:

Rate this poem please?

this is suppose to be a three word poem, the last two words are the first two words of the next line. rate 1 for bad and 5 for super.

Sunset
sun, down, go
down, go, dim
go, dim, sunset
dim, sunset, stars
sunset, stars, gone
stars, gone, goodbye
gone, goodbye, goodnight

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

5 it sounds very native american to me