Question:
What do you think of this poem?
You Might Miss The Show
As so many sit in wonder at the prisipalities of the power on the air.
Somany caskets each day buried but so few seem to care.
Though some may weep in the funual gloom
their consern for their own departure leaves them to soon.
Death makes us realize we have so limited time.
Like lambs to the slaughterhouse, who'll be next in line?
Here is the subject to consider the matter,
Should we be spending time in front of the TV or climbing Jacobs latter?
With so man diversions to ocupy our time.
Transported to other dementions to free our minds.
Does the T.V. realy transport us or is it practice for the tomb?
Has it taken the Life out of the livingroom?
Is your coffin your couch or reliner chair?
Take a look out side, there's a world going on out there.
A Mom says,
"You're wasting your life and you don't even know!"
Her child responds,
"Get out of my way Ma. I'm missing my show"
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i love the content, but because of some gramar and spelling issues it was a little hard to decipher. However...
GREAT idea, content, might wanna tweak the end though, it seems almost too informal compared to the rest
it is a great poem though, i wish i came up with it!!!