Pleeeeeeeeeease give me some feed back on this poem i've been working on?

Question:

Pleeeeeeeeeease give me some feed back on this poem i've been working on?

I??ve heard many lies.
This is the worst.
To build up an ego.
And just let it burst.
I went in the world,
believing your words,
Took a step out the door,
and was shot down like a bird.
How can you stand it?
Telling such things.
To build up an ego,
and give mankind wings.

I'd also like some ideas on titles....thanks in advance!

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You had me sold until the last line. I don't understand what it suppose to mean, but I'm a numbskull so...