Question:
Hi,this is it?
everything white,
searching your heart,
between pale faces, crouded emotions,
looking for accepense,
everything white,
only your dark love,
kind haert,
open arms,
and my concious
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
- Yes, this is how it should be with spellings corrected:
Sounds like a love poem, the speaker searching for love and wants to be accepted!! Sounds fine but spice it with more feeling. figures of speech can do the trick easily.
Everything white,
searching your heart,
between pale faces,
crowded emotions,
looking for acceptance. . . .
Everything white,
only your dark love,
kind heart,
open arms,
and my consciousness. . . .
-good luck