Question:
I need some feedback on a poem?
Buried Epitaph
Wriggling rice
Dining on stricken flesh
Death invited us
To your stiffened feast
We burrow between
Your wasting marrow-bone
Probing every cavity
Like frenzied necrophiles
We munch on vital riches
Inside nourishing ribs
Even bitter hearts appeal
To our non-picky appetites
We leave behind
Only your scraped skeleton
A final memento to remind
How we often got under your skin
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
very nice, <3 the get under your skin part
kind of gross though, great imagery