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Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > Will you critique this?Question: Will you critique this?i like writing poetry... it helps me vent, and get out my thoughts. I don't usually let people i know read it, but i showed my friend and she said it was good, but i want to know someone's opinion who isn't biased.. 2 months ago Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like it. One thing that was suggested to me is this: a lot of poetry that deals with feelings is pretty intense when the emotion is first written down. That's the time you vent. Then you re-write because there is more to writing poetry than just the raw emotions. Never be afraid to edit. That's how you take a good poem and make it a great one. Good luck with your writing. I like the line about the moon dancing erratically in your cup, and the image at the end of the poem. |