Question:
Please comment my poem...?
I
I just want to live a simple life,
With a happy family,
Praying together in one house,
And know how it would be.
II
I want to have a home,
Where I can be with my family,
Sharing some stories,
About our plan for the future
With no enemy
III
I want to be a good doctor,
To help the sick and needy,
To prevent any illness,
To have a healthy community...
IV
I want to pray to God
That I may have a peaceful life,
With no worries and no pain,
Less difficulty,
And not tied by a chain...
V
I want to serve God almighty,
For guiding me daily,
For having such a family,
And for helping me do
This short poem easily.
by: Blessing Cruz
Additional Details2 months ago
And please suggest a good tittle,.
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The want in me, The love in me, Guide to receive, Give me life, Let me feel, The good man ask, Help is on the way, Dream come true, With out a worry