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Hey, Please Answer my question!!!! (FAST)?

OK TELL ME WHAT YALL THINK ABOUT MY POEM PLZ!!!!
*oh and help me pick a name for my poem quick*

Thanks for always being there
for showing me that you always care
when my life isn't going right
when i felt and thought my life didnt have any purpose or hope
when i just felt i needed to get some dope
when things didnt seem fair
thanks for putting a smile on my face
for making my life a better place
when my life seems like a waste
thanks for cheering up my day
for showing me there is other ways
for always listening to everything i have to say
thanks for helping me through all my hard times
when things get rough
for listening to my problems
when i know you've heard enough
thanks for being there when i needed someone to comfort me
for helping me on everything i've been through
for being a real homie i know is true
thanks for supporting, loving, sharing, and caring about me
thanks for being my best friend til the end
copyright⩠2006 AP

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9 months ago
Well I just read the answers, and I want to thank yall for reading my poem, and for giving me ideas for the tittle of my poem, thank you. =)


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Hey...I really like your poem, It's real.
Here is a few ideas for your title.
My Life Light

Simple Truth

The Better Place Inside
Hope these will give you inspiration.