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Rate the poem : am i getting any better? 1-10?

title:waterfall

Sitting by a water fall
how peaceful and sound.

It's the perfect place
to sit around.

i step into the water,
but the current is strong.

Peaceful it sounds,
but strong all along.

So maybe i'll wait till
i calm down, and
i'll just have a look
at nature for now.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

THAT is beautiful. You cannot do ny better than you are at THIS moment. it is peaceful, loving and calm....on a scale...and I really do not like rating writings as I too write i do give it a 10...and tht is easy.....I would rather give it 1000. it is wonderful!