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Question:

this particular night,i see black. the damned colour
i see it flowing with the wind
painting my world black. yesterday..just the day before

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

'good'... for a start your not gonna add to it ,then it's too simple ..............i happen to like gloomy poetry