Question:
What do you think? your opinion is appreciated!?
This is my poem please read and give me feed back:
How does one move on from the past she's tried so hard to leave behind?
Anguish, disgust, pain, it all engulfs her tender heart so fragile.
She's been broken and abused,⠬ied to and confused, stabbed in her heart.
The past can not be forgotten, always haunting her, taunting her
She didn't ask for it, she didn't want it, but now she feels it
so nauseous and tormented, she feels so violated.
The sin is⠴heir's she knows, but her heart is heavy with memory.
The abuse is over, of that she's sure, now she must move on and let go.
-Meghan
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Sometimes it is easier to express deep feelings in a peom.
Hang in there. Jesus is loving you through it all. He suffered and knows what abuse is like and he did it all because of His Love for You.
God Bless You,