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What do you think? your opinion is appreciated!?

This is my poem please read and give me feed back:

How does one move on from the past she's tried so hard to leave behind?
Anguish, disgust, pain, it all engulfs her tender heart so fragile.
She's been broken and abused,⠬ied to and confused, stabbed in her heart.
The past can not be forgotten, always haunting her, taunting her
She didn't ask for it, she didn't want it, but now she feels it
so nauseous and tormented, she feels so violated.
The sin is⠴heir's she knows, but her heart is heavy with memory.
The abuse is over, of that she's sure, now she must move on and let go.

-Meghan


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It is a great poem. I hope it is not from personal expierence.

I am sure a lot of people can relate to this poem. Perhaps it could end with an even more positive phrase.

Along the lines of;
She'll bring it to the only one who reallys knows.
She'll bring it to God and let go.

And the sweetness of His love will dry every tear.
As God Assures her that He'll always be Near.


God Bless You, ;-)