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Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > What do think of my poem?Question: What do think of my poem?Trapped Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Remember this the next time you are writing a poem, writing is an art form and if you say for instance "This girl is trapped in a bad world" then you need to describe the world. For example: "I am trapped in world unlike what I have known what was once bright and peaceful is now dark and cold I feel a constricting pressure for every breath I take my bones have finally begun to break I try and try to crawl out of this place but there is no light and no hope for me this is my life and the only thing I can do is just wait." something like that, you want to focus on describing things as if you are trying to describe it to a blind man/woman. |