Question:
What do you think of my poem?
I am the cause of deaths and wars,
Men are posessed by me.
Without me the world would be a better place,
Yet for me you'd give your life.
And each time good is done in this world,
I'm worshipped, honoured and praised.
But my sins are never blamed on me,
But blamed on another fantasy creature.
You follow me and believe in me,
It could be a fatal mistake.
Ignore me and look at me as nothing,
Then nothing I shall be.
I have told you all my dangers,
Now you all must decide.
If I am nothing, just a myth,
Or if I am your life, your God.
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Alright dude,
It's good but NOT good enough to be a man who writes poetry for a living, seen better
But still good
=P