Question:
Can you tell me how this poem sounds?
I have never writeen a poem before, and I am struggling so bad.
Please do not be too harsh, but tips are welcome. Thanks
Sleepless nights,
and endless days.
Weekends turn,
To weeks on end.
Time stands still
When you are all alone
Just left to be.
Cant anyone see
That its bothering me?
I am having such a hard time with these poems!!!! Can someone please tell me how to write an anecdote, and maybe a website that can help me.
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Just a little tweaking, seemed a little wordy. The concept is true, beautiful job.
Sleepless nights,
endless days.
Weekends turn
to weeks on end.
Time stands still
when you're alone
Just left to be.