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What do you think of my poem?

Oh christian faithfuls, lovers of God,
I'm in awe at your trust.
I ask of you just one question,
Can you tell me who you are.

You tell me wonder stories,
Of the miracles of christ.
But now I have heard christ's story,
Please can I ask, what's yours?

You tell me that to enter heaven,
You must serve a human life.
But how do you serve a human life,
When you act as a saint.

You've told me all now let me tell you,
Just one thing before I go.
There's one thing worth a thousand Gods,
This thing is your life as a man.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I think you poem is questioning.....you are searching for something, you have unanswered issues. You want to know what is real, you pro tray you sorta know and yet you wonder. Your life here leads to your life in heaven. Make the most here and anticipate your eternal destination making the preparations to ensure you don't have unanswered questions regarding your salvation.