Criticize please? Please help me critisize this poem, like it or..not?

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Criticize please? Please help me critisize this poem, like it or..not?

Lighhouse In Me

So each have a journey
We often wander
Sailing in serenity
Fighting against we yonder

Life's full of bliss
Sometimes misery
Leaping beyond
Sailing + Lighthouse

Who needs a lighthouse
Canoe arise to shrink
A light forgotten
But standing

Cast all the darkness
Shed a light from me
Rays will led
Sleep in my arms finally

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Okay there is alot going on there, kinda vague, but interesting.