Question:
Which story is better?
Hey!This is my school assignment, so help me out alright?I have 2 stories in mind which i dont know which is better.Help me choose and give me more ideas on how to improve.THANKS
1. Father and son were having the fight of their life. Son is getting very rebelious and he blamed dad for not spending time with him, and that DAD is being insensitive and unreasonable. Son got real pissed off and locked himself in the room. He fell asleep after that and woke up realising he is in the life of his dad. He then discovered his dad's life as being tough and he worked hard for the family. At the end of day, he understood his dad, and he became a good boy after that.
2. it is about the guy who is really unlucky. so his day will start off being unlucky, encountering several mishaps , he will be badly treated at work. ( its something like chris pine in just my luck, i will make this part really funny) however, at the end of day, there will always be a loved one sitting beside you and supporting u
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like #2 but you might want to have your unlucky boy have all kinds of trivial bad luck and then meet someone who is REALLY unlucky in a major way and then he can count his blessings including those who love him.