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I love writing poems, please tell me if you think this is good or not?

You always seem to know what's right
You always see the good in things
You can't see me though
You can't see how I'm feeling
You can't see your leaving me behind in a cloud of feelings of what's real
I need more
I need you
I need love
I need to know I am going to succeed
I need to know I am going to fail
I need to feel safe and not alone
I need to feel whats real

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8 months ago
By the way its called YOU and I


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Wow.. thats really pretty!!.. its kinda how people feel on some days!!.. keep writing!!.. things are hard to put into words and u put them well!!..