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WHAT DO YOU THiNK ABOUT THIS POEM?????

Why do I have these dreams
and flashbacks
of everything I lack
& things I wish I could take back
I rather stay awake
then suffer through the night
with the horrible images that
happen when I sleep
because there is one thing
i must keep
my sanity
Each & every day I pray
that I`ll be able
to make it through the day
All i do is lay
in bed
grasping for a breath
wishing i could be reborn
so I can take away all I`ve done
and start all over again
I lay there quietly
a million thoughts flood through my head
sometimes I wish I was dead
so all this would just come to an end
but at the same time thats one of my worst fears
I think the worst thing of all
is not being able to cry tears
I forgot the feeling or even how
Sometimes I wish I could just let it all out
but they are all inside of me
in a huge abyss of lost
thoughts,emotions,feelings
I`ve become emotionless,numb
like a cold dark bottomless pit
I yearn to feel
something
rather than
nothing.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

extremely depressing and dark :(