Question:
What do you think of my poem/prose?
Darkness is more deadly than you can imagine. It has colours inside itself that are too evil for you to handle.
Colours that if you saw, would be fatal. There is just one heroic thing that saves you from this beast, This is black. Where darkness spreads, black follows, guarding you from every unimaginable colour darkness brings you. Black is nocturnal, protecting us only at night, Darkness, however, is awake every hour you live. It cannot rest until we all come to our everlasing rest. Each day we live brings darknes more rage. Rage that soon even black shan't be able to win over.
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
pretty good! keep it up!