Question:
How does this poem sound?
I watched yesterday and waited for love,
he never showed up.
I watched yesterday and waited for passion,
but I wasn't passionate enough
I watched yesterday and waited for hope.
But she never came through the door
Why has thou abandoned me,
when I need thee evermore.
I listened for a sign
but nothing said a word
I waited for a vision
but that thought was obsured.
Then I felt a breeze soft and sincere
and then I knew my love was near.
That's when I saw you
and that glisten in your eyes
and that's when I knew
I had won my prize.
So now as we sit happily face to face
I want you to know you were truly worth the wait.
Here's another poem off the top of my head. How does it sound? Do you think I was born to write because I think it is my calling!!
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Pretty boring.
Coach