Question:
How does this poem sound?
Distant tremors fill my heart
as I think of us being apart.
Solitude I dare not bare
Lonliness most unfair
Holding your hand is my hearts rejoice
And being beside you is my best choice.
I'll fight for our passionate exotic embrace
I'll fight for our love no man can take
I wrote this poem off the top of my head. Can I have some comments or suggestions? Do you think I am a born writer?
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
its cute. good job!