Another Poem I made. What do you think about it?

Question:

Another Poem I made. What do you think about it?

This is the third poem I've made about the girl I like.

"I'll Be There For You"

I'll be there for you.
And will never treat you
Like Dirt.

I'll be there for you.
Even when you are
Down and Hurt.

I'll be there for you.
Because that is me.
I am your friend.

I'll be there for you.
Always,and will be
Until the very end.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

This is a sweet poem but it lacks meaning. What I mean by this is you don't play with your words. Instead you get straight to the point. Next time try using something like this....

Your love is like a rose
so honest and true

Your love is like the soul
distinct with truths

Your love is like the rain
feeding the trees

Your love is the reason I am me!