What do you think of this poem, because English isn't my mother tongue?

Question:

What do you think of this poem, because English isn't my mother tongue?

My Love...
I've never ever believed in love
Never thought that love could be true
Could be real
Until I knew him
I've felt his existence with all my senses
I wish I could make him my sight,
My voice,
My heart,
My mined,
My everything,
Because I have just recognized that he is the love of my life,
Happiness is between his hands,
Sadness; is living far from his love,
My soul is his hand,
Oh my LORD!!
Oh my GOD!!
Oh ALLAH!!
I LOVE YOU...

Additional Details

8 months ago
Thx xarmywife it really means a lot to me,
How about my 'English' brothers and sisters? is it ok or not?

8 months ago
Thank you my e-sister aussiep!! that really means a lot to me =)
also thank you my e-brother soulguy85, but sorry what does Psalm 151 means?

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

you are truly blessed
your poem is beautiful
you can be proud
& you can be assured your lord love's you in return!!