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WHAT DO YOU THINK OF THiS POEM?????

Take a razorblade to my head and scratch my eyes out.

Dig until you hollow me out.

Find what makes me tick.

Empty me.

Satisfy me.

Make me physically what I feel inside,

empty,

drained of emotion,

apathetic,

without a care, except a self-loathing.

I am but an ugly unbearable imperfection.

Kill me

Numb that aching, thobbing heart of mine.

Thrust in the dagger that I've placed where my heart should be.

Give me what I deserve

for the pain I've caused,

for the pain I enjoy giving.

For I am heartless,

sadistic at best.

I am the devil reincarnated.

Rip me to shreds

and defile me like the Mussolini I am.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

WOW! Lots of emotion and anger. I like it :)