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What do you think of my poem/prose?

When a drop of blood falls in the river, it's piercing deep red colour will live in the current for a few minutes before fading into the deep, mighty, non stopping waters. It will be forgoten. Only a few will remember that one drop of blood. Most people will just see it as another death, and await the next one to fall, and be forgotten the next day.


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It begins as if it were a story instead of a poem, so as a poem I find it bland and uninteresting. But as a prose it is well written.